transformer blew, won't have wifi for a couple days. ill be at the library but Im stuck on where to go next with my fic

is negan any closer to his comic counterpart?

I thought I answered both your questions. I'll come by later and give you a full response.

I'm sorry to hear about your transformer. With your fic....maybe you can have Shane & Co. meet Daryl and Merle. Or Dale, Andrea, and Amy. Jacqui, Jim, T-Dog and Glenn. Try imagining how they all came together as a group before Rick came back.

With Negan...it's hard for me to say because I'm so behind in the comics, but based on what other posters say here and on WT (WalkieTalkes) I'd say that show Negan and is different from comic Negan.

Aw, that sucks. I'm not saying JDM's acting is bad, but in my opinion his Negan is far more bad guyish than comic Negan. Of course, I've only seen the first half of this season, so I could be wrong, but I'm disappointed with what they've done so far.

Thanks for the advice! I got a message from my other beta yesterday too, so hopefully she'll be able to check it out and give me advice too. It was her idea to put that scene in with Shane and the conversation with that other cop storing water hehe :)

I've worked on some of the second half, though I haven't added any extras. I was going to a couple days ago, but I got sick and I'm too lazy to walk to the library XD

Yeah, it seems like fans have a mixed reaction to JDM's portrayal. I enjoy it very much, but I also haven't gotten to the comic-Negan part so I'm going based on what I'm seeing. I think when you finish watching the season, you can see if he matches the comic. I will say there's a part they did keep in that shows Negan is well-rounded.

You're very welcome. I hope the idea helps you out. I love the idea of the cop storing the water and Shane's conversation. I look forward to more of your fic.

Are you still sick? I hope you feel better!